oh well, i know it is not some of my best work, but i suppose the whole point of me posting stuff is less about praise, and more about feedback
any who, i guess i am still trying to settle into a particular style to call my own, but i am not sure if that will ever really happen, since it seems that my work often portrays the visual equivalent of someone who has mpd, since it seems like it could have been done by one of several people at anyone time, or at least when it comes facial design, but i guess i am rambling now
anyway, i really enjoy to get some feedback, since that seems to be one of the easiest ways to help some on improve at times
I really like this one. Her face is nice and her cheeks are well proportioned with one another with an adorable level of roundess. The flabs and rolls of her stomach, breasts, ass and thighs seem to flow very well too. I however have one thing that seems a little off to me and that is her left arm. Just the area where her lower arm meets her upper arm, in the elbow area, seems to be in an awkward angle. The fat on the upper arm is nice, but I don't thinkthe anatomy of her arm plays out right on her arm...in the sense that the elbow area has an indention as opposed to jutting out when someone bends their orm in that position.
However, it is only a minor complaint/observation (moreso the latter) because the reast of it is so good it makes up for it. I think if Jesus were an FA, he'd approve of it.
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Actually, I think this one is really good. Although I think the lower belly should be a little bigger. It looks oddly uneven. But I think this is a great picture. Peace, Kelly
The body and face are well detailed but when it comes to the legs I think there is room for improvement.
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However, it is only a minor complaint/observation (moreso the latter) because the reast of it is so good it makes up for it. I think if Jesus were an FA, he'd approve of it.
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People are always talking about staying in shape. Last time I checked, round IS a shape.
Peace,
Kelly
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i still feel i have a way to go when it comes learning anatomy
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well, lets see, uh yeah, that what i am saying. you get it now?
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